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Re: How to Attract Readers
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Nov 13, 2015
Unoriginality here, I've only been here for a year and I've seen this work before and it was funny...The first time i saw it. Maybe adding something extra something you ... -
Re: Punctuation is where it is
Who says that there's nothing to review? Maybe you could get a review. This review isn't a review it's a figment of your imagination. Your description made me think that ...
Oct 28, 2015 -
Re: Never Ending Friendship
Hi there and Welcome to YWS, I'm here to Review this work. Unfortunately (this is for your description) 1 great friend is WAY better than 1000 friends. Anyways this poem ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: An Arrival Later Unwelcomed
Hey there, I'm here to review this piece you've written. I love the first Stanza, someway it kinda grasped my attention so good going keep this up. Maybe in the ...
Sep 29, 2015 -
Re: Finally
Hey there, my review will probably focus more on the characters in a short way since i cant type much more on my tablet but ill help as much as ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: I'm... A Dreamer
Hi there and happy review day! Im going to do my best to review this work on my tablet so pardon any of the misspellings and whatnot. Anyways, Winston seems ...
Sep 27, 2015 -
Re: Anxiety
I kinda get where this poem comes from, And to me this actually sounds like well Anxiety. Your thoughts are broken and all they do is focus on what can ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.0]
Hey Lightsong, Im here to review your work and i must say it is a beautiful piece of work. I do have a few nit picks with it and pardon ...
Sep 2, 2015 -
Re: I'll be there.
Hello there Meredeth. Tis I the frenchiest fry xD. Im here to review your beautiful poem here. I can honestly say that I love this poem because of the use ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: Merry Christmas To Me
I dont know if this is a poem, or if this is...actually I dont know what this is period. Honestly I'm not much of a sensitive person when it comes ...
Jul 19, 2015 -
Re: A piece of The Crystal Man
Hey there mem here to review your work. Im going to jump in and review this for you. Im a 17 year old young adult, So in ways I'm mature ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Diablo
Hey there, Mem here for a review on your short story. Im going to start from the end of your story and go up since I noticed most of my ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: If only I could
Hey there, Mem here for a review on your poem. Im going to jump right into it and I'll probably go through all the lines if I can, just a ...
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: Memoirs Of Heart Sorrow
Hey there, Happy Review Day to you!
Apr 26, 2015 -
Re: The morning mist
Hi there memory again for another review. I'm just going to jump right in here and help you out. Capitalization is your very best friend here. I miss a lot ...
Apr 7, 2015
