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  • Other » General, General Re: How to Attract Readers

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    Unoriginality here, I've only been here for a year and I've seen this work before and it was funny...The first time i saw it. Maybe adding something extra something you ...

    Nov 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Literature, Culture Re: Punctuation is where it is

    Who says that there's nothing to review? Maybe you could get a review. This review isn't a review it's a figment of your imagination. Your description made me think that ...

    Oct 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Never Ending Friendship

    Hi there and Welcome to YWS, I'm here to Review this work. Unfortunately (this is for your description) 1 great friend is WAY better than 1000 friends. Anyways this poem ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Arrival Later Unwelcomed

    Hey there, I'm here to review this piece you've written. I love the first Stanza, someway it kinda grasped my attention so good going keep this up. Maybe in the ...

    Sep 29, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Other Re: Finally

    Hey there, my review will probably focus more on the characters in a short way since i cant type much more on my tablet but ill help as much as ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: I'm... A Dreamer

    Hi there and happy review day! Im going to do my best to review this work on my tablet so pardon any of the misspellings and whatnot. Anyways, Winston seems ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: Anxiety

    I kinda get where this poem comes from, And to me this actually sounds like well Anxiety. Your thoughts are broken and all they do is focus on what can ...

    Sep 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Romantic Re: When Dream and Reality Collide [Chapter 1.0]

    Hey Lightsong, Im here to review your work and i must say it is a beautiful piece of work. I do have a few nit picks with it and pardon ...

    Sep 2, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I'll be there.

    Hello there Meredeth. Tis I the frenchiest fry xD. Im here to review your beautiful poem here. I can honestly say that I love this poem because of the use ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Other » Humor, Health Re: Merry Christmas To Me

    I dont know if this is a poem, or if this is...actually I dont know what this is period. Honestly I'm not much of a sensitive person when it comes ...

    Jul 19, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: A piece of The Crystal Man

    Hey there mem here to review your work. Im going to jump in and review this for you. Im a 17 year old young adult, So in ways I'm mature ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Diablo

    Hey there, Mem here for a review on your short story. Im going to start from the end of your story and go up since I noticed most of my ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If only I could

    Hey there, Mem here for a review on your poem. Im going to jump right into it and I'll probably go through all the lines if I can, just a ...

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Realistic Re: Memoirs Of Heart Sorrow

    Hey there, Happy Review Day to you!

    Apr 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Fantasy Re: The morning mist

    Hi there memory again for another review. I'm just going to jump right in here and help you out. Capitalization is your very best friend here. I miss a lot ...

    Apr 7, 2015


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