Its moral garbage
How can I get down with Dickinson
When Whitman flys free in the cockles of my heart?
Who's to say when punctuation? is needed
I am a particle of the universe
Not a number for your chart baby cakes
Let me roam with my kind
In the depths of my soul
Or we can pick oranges
It does not matter to me
Break the cage
I know its scary
Take that lamp
Its not theirs any way
Take a stand
Or maybe two
Why not?
If the sign says take one
Look into yourself
Its your choice
Not the sign's
Sigh
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this is probably one of my favorite poems I have ever read. From the first line till the end ( I don't know if you intended this) but I laughed a little. The point to your poem is hi and I think so many other people should read this. I think you could take this poem even farther maybe making like a "no punctuation" series or something? I can't wait to see the other things you write! Great Job!!!!!
Not bad. Althought some punction is needed along with some commas here and there.
Put a period after sign's(.)
and put sigh in itailcs.
Who's to say when punctuation? is needed.
The i in is (is needed)
in its put an apostrphie( I spelled that wrong) It's a bad habit to write is instead of it's. I confess though, I do it too sometimes.
Nice story.
Bye and keep writing with your great mind!
~MrMuddyPig!
Who says that there's nothing to review? Maybe you could get a review. This review isn't a review it's a figment of your imagination.
Your description made me think that there was only a period in this poem. I was very disappointed.
Your lack of punctuation is disappointing since the title is very misleading.
This poem makes no sense, so work on it a bit, it's all over the place so be careful of that, people might be upset about that.
Ok job on this poem, once again if there was some punctuation as the title suggests then you would have 5 stars and not the one I'm giving you
The Punctuation is where it is, if there is none deal with it.
This review was a joke, I wasnt critiquing, just making a joke
ok baby