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AlyssaB506

AlyssaB506

  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Sun's Rays

    I wish you would post more often. You are truly an amazing and impactful writer. In fact, out of all of your forms of writing I've read, and there are ...

    Jul 14, 2017
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Historical Fiction Re: ​Four Knights

    Hey! I would just like to start off by saying that I thoroughly enjoyed this piece! :) :) :) I think you did a tremendous job! Just for organization purposes, ...

    Jul 14, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: It Hurts

    TEEEARS WELLING UP IN EYES! DO NOOOOOT DO THIS TO ME, MISSY. I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, YOUNG LADY! I KNOW YOU HAVE HAPPINESS IN YOU! DON'T YOU DARE MAKE ...

    Apr 18, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Trampoline Joy

    Heeey, Alyssa here :). First of all, I would like to say that you did a great job. You truly tried to entice your readers by taking them on that ...

    Apr 18, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: If it wasn't for love,

    Hey :) I would like to start off by saying job well done. For the purpose of organization, I am going to organize this in pros and cons, but great ...

    Jul 3, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Why Persevere?

    You have soooo many pooooosts child! How many more are there? I would just like to say that this poem is amazing, but you didn't let me pick it! How ...

    Nov 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Alone

    HEY JEEEEEESS JEEEEEESS!! :) It looks like you have not posted in a while, but I hope you continue writing soon. Your poems always have a significant meaning behind them ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Lyrics » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: An Apology

    Heeellloooo! :) Let me start off by saying that I felt as though you put a lot of thought and effort into your poem. I really appreciate that in authors. ...

    Nov 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: For Sale

    Well, that was simple. Quite amusing actually :). Opening this document was a bit of a surprise. Most authors here write long, continuous stories. Making it absolutely evident that they ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: 10 Lines of Breath

    Overall, I rather enjooooyed you poem. :) I thought it was small, simple, concise, and well thought through. For organizational purposes, I will divide this into a prooos and cooons ...

    Jul 16, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Conundrum

    Wow! This poem was verrrrry deep and meaningful. For organizational purposes, I am going to organze this into a pros and cons list! :) Pros: I love the meaning behind ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: Sugar Plum's Lullaby

    Overall, great job! Pros and Cons list: Negatives: There were a few repetitive lines that I don't think were supposed to come off that way. And in the first paragraph, ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: A lullaby: I'm a little princess

    I loved it! Sorry for this very boring review. (I really need the coins). Pros and Cons: Pros: I liked the flow of the lyrics. They were actually quite musical. ...

    Jul 15, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: When The Bell Tolls

    I have to say, I loved your poem. You were very abstract and creative while writing this. To make everything easier on you, I will format this as some what ...

    Mar 31, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Colors

    Wow! For a poem named "Colors", you have definately incorporated a ton of emotion such in a short amount of writing. Honestly, I think your poem is amazing! To make ...

    Feb 22, 2015


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