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AlfredSymon

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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: untold hidden secrets

    Good day, Zohali! Al here for a Point Out, for more information on my reviews, please visit my Clinic, the link is below in my signature! First, lemme give you ...

    Mar 18, 2012
  • Article / Essay » Culture, General Re: The Man's Man

    Hey Poll! Al here both for a Quick Critique and a short opinion on your topic! For more information on my reviews, check out my clinic, the link is in ...

    Mar 16, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Complete & Improved Prologue Keychain Magic

    Hi MM! Sorry for the late review! But here I am for an Editor’s Note! I really wanted to give you a Quick Critique, but since this is an improved ...

    Mar 16, 2012
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: This is Why I Love Writing.

    Hey Jackie! Me again for a Kudos Revue! It's been a while since I saw your last few pieces, so lemme give you a quality review! :D Personally, this is ...

    Mar 11, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: New Year, Old Memories

    Black Chaos! Here is your pal, Al, for a Point Out! So, this is a poem from long ago, eh? How long? 2000 years? 200 Days? 20 hours? 2 minutes? ...

    Feb 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: -Post (Chapter 1, #1)

    Hi Wario! Here’s Al for a Quick Critique! Any working titles for the piece? It’s really great! A subtle erosion of psychotic stability. It haunts my mind right now :D ...

    Feb 13, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: You Can't Tell the Children There Is No Hope

    I can tell the children this poem's great! Okay, so now for a Quick Critique! For any review requests or questions, have an appointment on my clinic below at my ...

    Feb 7, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Update On Keychain Magic: Prologue + Chapter One

    Moonlight! The moon is setting down! I'll give you the best review I can! Oh, and I'll take the technicalities area later within this review, because I'll be posting everything ...

    Feb 5, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Noise

    Hey The Traveler! Alfred here! So, I read the thread below and I see that you don't seem to like critiques. Do remember that reviews are very important for a ...

    Feb 3, 2012
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Maia (REVISED!!)

    Hey Xyra, dear! Alfred here for an Editor's Note! Prompts awaiting! First and foremost, I would like to say that I'm impressed by the way you storytell. You have this ...

    Feb 2, 2012
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: The Program

    Hello Camulaeus! Alfred here for a Point Out! For more information on my critiques, check out my clinic; the link is within my signature below. Hey, I know you haven't ...

    Feb 2, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Hunted

    Hey, Nick! Alfred here for a Point Out! For questions on the reviews I give or you want a review for your piece, check my clinic; at my signature's a ...

    Feb 1, 2012
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Wild World

    Hi Skermitz! Love the name! Ha! Okay, since most of the reviewing tools are down, I'll give a simply presented Editor's Note. Info on my 'types' of reviews can be ...

    Jan 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Saggitarious

    Hey Sakura! Sorry for my late comment! So, a poem, eh? Let's go onto it with a simple review! I haven't found the exact reason why you titled your piece ...

    Jan 30, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just A Thought – To Show You Care

    Here's what I can do, a Quick Critique! Or a Smile-o-meter. The reviewing system's a bit buggy, so a simple review will do lots. Hey Doxie! So, a poem, eh? ...

    Jan 29, 2012


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