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AkuRashomon

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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Lack of Words

    Hey there! This is loveisourgrapes and I am here to give you a little review. The title is very fitting for the description so I planned to review/comment on it. ...

    Jun 18, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: returning home, back to sea

    Hello! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review/comment about your poem that was posted on a date I wasn't so active on because I had a lot of ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Yellow: Chapter 1

    Hi there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to review your chapter. It's been awhile since I got to read an interesting plot of a novel/chapter. The cover art ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Delusional Love Colors

    Hello there! You seem new here since you just joined approximately around March, this year. I saw this was a new writing in the Green Room and decided to review/comment ...

    Jun 17, 2023
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Lyrical Re: Reverie

    Hi there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrape back to review/comment about a poem of our lovely writer, @alpacaboss! I love your writings, by the way. Since last poem I've read ...

    Jun 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: I looked like her

    Hey there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to read your lovely poem. Sorry if there might be typos because I am typing this review/comment on my ...

    Jun 16, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: when the bees sleep

    Hey there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I am here to give your lovely poem a review/comment. It is good to know that your mother that no threat in ...

    Jun 15, 2023
  • Other » Horror, Other Re: the haunted areas pt 2

    Hey there! This is loveissourgrapes again and I came here to review your part 2 of this interesting story. The grammar and the spelling errors are fewer here now and ...

    Jun 14, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: to touch a star

    HI there! I saw this and it was just freshly posted so I wanted to review/comment on it. Ugh, I love poems about summer. I love summer but I sweat ...

    Jun 13, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Just Clowning Around: Part 1 - 1.3

    Hey there! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a little review/comment. I saw the cover art and I loved it so I clicked on this chapter. ...

    Jun 13, 2023
  • Other » Horror, General Re: horror theme park pt1

    Hello there! This is loveissourgrapes and this is one of my first times reading a story that is horror. To me, as a 13-year-old person, I do not feel tense ...

    Jun 13, 2023
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Literature Re: Woman in Black

    Good morning, noon, afternoon, or evening @Valkyria! This is loveissourgrapes and I am here to give you a tiny review/comment. Your descriptions in your writing are great, even the dialogue. ...

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: do i splatter against the white bedspread in your room

    Hello there, @LadyBug! Oh, how I love your poems! I am sorry if this review/comment might have errors because I am writing this on my phone hihi. The A/N tells ...

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: I don't remember!!!

    Hey there ALICE! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes back again to review/comment on your wonderful poems that have been in the literary spotlight for days! This poem is sad though ...

    Jun 12, 2023
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: Bearers of the Light

    Hey there! This is Ina aka loveissourgrapes and I finally gave time to read this wonderful story with a message with a great impact. The title is very fitting for ...

    Jun 11, 2023


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