AkuRashomon

Hello, hi! This is Ina speaking. I love how the story builds up and how the story tells stories from the past. I found the story interesting how it was ...

Hello @Horisun! This is Ina speaking. I'm not good with words but here's a review. This poem gives me chills, and I read it when it was midnight and cold ...

Hello @vampricone6783! This is Ina speaking. I really like your fantasy and supernatural writings like this one. They give the feeling you feel when you're at the edge of your ...

Hi, hello. I am Ina. This poem reminds me of those old bedtime stories my mom used to read for me. Yeah and I read this when it was close ...

Hi, hello! This is Ina speaking. I like how you interpreted emotions with a mix of chaos and being anxious. Sometimes, especially when I was younger I would feel this ...

Hi, hello! I came to read your poem! "She passes you on her way home. You stop to say hello. She greets you with a friendly smile, But little do ...

Hello there! This poem of yours is very nice. I can imagine so many things with every single line you wrote and how the narrator feels like. And the images ...

Hello there! I like how the starting went to hype me up for what's gonna happen next. The ending made me question a lot things though but I guess that's ...

Hi there! This story is the reason why Mom doesn't buy me dolls anymore. Plus, I think, myself, dolls are scary and I'm a person who usually get scared with ...

Hi there! The question "Are you okay?" just feels very nice. Especially when a loved one asks you that question. The narrator is having a hard time mentally becuase of ...

Hmm, this poem is very interesting. It seems like I'm reading a newspaper and with Mr. Mayor's doing no one's gonna do anyhting about it. I feel like if this ...

Hi @LadyBug. You are very good at simple yet elegant and beautiful poems. I'm gonna applaud and follow you for that. This reminds me of my imaginary best friend I ...

Hi there! Gonna give a quick review. Ooh I love showers. Like I can feel the heat of hot water dripping from a shower landing on the top of my ...

Hi there! Your poem can tell a story. It may seem sad but it still has hope in it in some way. I imagine many things as I read throughout ...

Hello, Caitlin Crowder. It just gives you the feeling that every love story gives you. It also sounds like I'm reading an story set in the 60's or 40's. In ...