AkeliaTaske

Hey there! Akelia here for a review! So there wasn't much here for me to reveiew, as is with poems, but here's some of the stuff I noticed. I usually ...

So, I've been reading this story, and I am very intrigued by the whole thing. But, on the bad side, I did find quite a few errors. One I found ...

HEYO!! Akelia here, for yet another review :) Good news, this is my 25th review!!!! So, let's get this started. You already know about my "sweet and sour" review thing, ...

Heyo AnnGrace! It's me, Akelia Taske! Time for a review. *shuffles hands evilly* I start off every review with saying I'm going to do something that I call sweet and ...

Hey there! Akelia here! Time for a review! First of all, this small story was pretty amazing! I really liked that in your opener for the story, you used an ...

Heyo! Akelia here! Time for a review. So, first off I thought this short story was EXTREMLY well written and very well detailed! You maintained the same flow throughout the ...

Hi! Akelia here! Time for a review :) So, let's get started with this review. I like to do all my reviews with sweet and sour, so let's start with ...

Hi there! It's Akelia! Anyway, what's up? I'm here to review this work of writing! I usually do reviews as sweet and sour, so let's start with the sour first, ...

Hey there! Akelia here! So, let's get this review started, now I do admit I'm not the greatest at reviewing but I will do my best! I always do my ...

Hey there! Thanks for inviting me over for a look at your first draft! Let me say, I really enjoyed reading this! It was very well written, and well described. ...

You're entire story has been reviewed so much, I don't think there's anything left for me to say! But, I will do my best. :) OK, for the sweetness. I ...

Wow, that was...WOW. This was very good, and very well written! I did see that you were intending to rhyme, but I didn't see a rhyme on every single one. ...

Oh my gosh, this was SSOOOOOO cute! I loved this so much. I have a little sister who's 8, and she absolutely ADORES unicorns. When I was reading this poem, ...

Wow, this is very good! A couple things though. There was some rhyming in here, and I liked those, but there were some lines that I wasn't so sure on. ...

Wow, that was really deep. I have not had an experience with smoking, but my uncle, my friends, and my cousins do. This whole story is really inspiring NOT to ...