Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Hmm...now I'm not quite sure if this is meant to be its own story or if its part of a bigger something, but it certainly sounds like how you would expect something like a prologue to sound here.
Anyway let's get right to it,
This feeling is exquisite! I’m at the top of the world. I am rolling down the hill just thinking about the coming time. I am flying for sure! You could just see the wings that have rooted out from my back – all white and feathery. To only think that once again I can stop at nothing and nowhere would be my destination! Its amazing Roulin, isn’t it? I would be free at last. No roof on my head and no walls to root me to a single place – my shackles will be unbolted once more. And this time I wouldn’t return for the world. Ha! Free at last!
Okay...looks like this is a message for someone named Roulin judging by the way that this thing here appears to be written at any rate. And well, this certainly seems to be quite a happy message judging by the overall tone of things and it looks like the person writing it wants convey this happen towards this Roulin. And of course the message itself is pretty interesting in its own right there. It looks like something happened to the sender of the message that gave them wings somehow and know they're enjoy the kind of freedom that a pair of wings can give you...so....also quite an interesting premise there.
But it is sad that you wouldn’t be here, Roulin, to see my flight to freedom. You would be too busy tumbling down those alleyways of hatred to think of anything. Oh! How I wish I could save you from those feelings! I tried and – thank goodness – you can’t blame me for it this time! I escaped without even thinking about it…you were just out of luck. But rest assured I’m really caring. I would never forget you. You may have been swallowed up in hatred and envy but your sacrifice did let me out of hell. It is true that I love you – and had all these years – but you can’t blame anyone for feeling ecstatic when being let out of a cage. It happens in humans and I told you, my humanity died the day I was born. Roulin this is my last gift for you.
Ohh...soo that just made things ten times more interesting there, it looks like this person escaped from hell somehow...and well I'm really not sure whether this Roulin is meant to be evil somehow with all this talk of hatred and envy and about how they were all stuck in hell in the first place, but then this person escaping and not thinking about that person kind of makes me thing the one who's sending this "gift" as they call it could also be the bad person here, certainly puts a few seeds of doubt into this one for sure. Well, this ending was definitely really interesting. I don't quite know if this was meant to be a prologue, or a chapter, or is this some kind of short story, but well, if there's more of it, I would definitely read it.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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