AfterTheStorm

Hey, Love! The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya tonight. ^-^ Let's get started! "She traces the line of her butterfly Right where the scars are engraved." I ...

Hey, Missing Piece! Welcome to YWS! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya tonight. If you need any assistance concerning the site, feel free to let me ...

Heya, Firefox! :D The name's Storm, and I'll be reviewing for ya this very rainy afternoon. Before I begin my nitpicking, I just would like to let you know that ...

Hey, Intel! :D The name is Storm, and I'll be checking over "Lies" for you this afternoon! Right, so. First off, I like the descending pattern you've created visually and ...

Good afternoon, Rainbow! The name's Storm and I'll be reviewing for ya! :D Let's just jump right into this... Right off the bat, there's a lack of a comma. "'May ...

Hey, Sarah! The name is After the Storm (but you can call me Storm), and I'll be reviewing for you this afternoon. :D I have a few quick tips concerning ...

Heya, Dragonette! *squishes* I'm so proud of your hard work. ^-^ Anyways, I have the pleasure of reviewing for ya this afternoon! Regarding the technical side of this chapter, I ...

Hey, Meggs! The name is Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya this afternoon! :D The following are a few issues I noticed immediately, and deemed the ...

Good morning, Rbt! The name's Storm, and I'll be checking over your work on this lovely Review Day. :) Without further ado, allow me to plunge right in with some ...

Good 1:00 a.m. to you, Emilie! The name is Storm, and I'll have the pleasure of reviewing for ya this morning! :) Nothing like a few nitpicks to start off ...

What's up, Jibber? It's Storm here to review for you once more! :D Being an avid fan of mythology (especially of that pertaining to Greece), I was honestly wary of ...

Hey, Amethyst! The name's Storm, and I have the pleasure of reviewing for you tonight. ^-^ Because all of your previous reviewers (This work is evidently popular! Haha) have already ...

Heya, Mary! :D The name's Storm, and I will be reviewing for ya on this very, very chilly night. *rubs hands together* Let me begin with a few nitpicks. (I ...

Myself I thought. A comma is necessary after "Myself". The entire day, it had been gloomy, ... The comma causing a pause after "day" does not need to be there. ...

Hi, Ancient! The name's Storm, and I'll be doing a quick review for ya tonight! :D I am not making this review into a "quickie" simply because I lack the ...