User avatar

AdmiralKat

AdmiralKat's Wall

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Opening Night

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Oh! I haven't reviewed poetry in such a long time! So I found something online and let's see if it will help me ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned 1.1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... You are surely shoving a lot of information right now in these first few paragraphs, I ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Burned. Prologue *edited*

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I wish you had all of this a little bit more dramatically written. Like I think ...

    Mar 7, 2015
  • Art » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Buklau

    Hello, KatyaElefant here for a review! I wish to give you a nice and warm welcome to YWS! I hope that you will stay here with us! Anyways, let us ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Syrin: Essential Fire - Chapter 1

    Hello, Wolfare1! KatyaElefant here to finally review your novel! What a surprise and miracle, you might say. I say, I've been taking my time. I've been hibernating and then this ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 34 Part 3

    Hello, Noelle! Let us take a moment of silence to realize how much I have reviewed these past week. I think I'm sweating through my eyes right now! Oh and ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 34 Part 2

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review but it's not any ordinary review! It's a green room review! I'm super pumped but sad that I'm about to finish what you ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 34 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! This is the last chapter! We have come so far! Oh my gosh! Like I'm going to finish what you have so for ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: gun powder

    Hello, zpur! Welcome to YWS! I hope that you are enjoying your stay here and that you continue to stay here! KatyaElefant here for a review! Let's see what we ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 4

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... How thick is this fog? I wish you had explained that a little bit better. If ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 3

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... So wait. How did Rhys manage to take over worlds without his locket that takes away ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 2

    Hello, KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I wish when you were talking about how Akia wanted her old life back, that you said ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 33 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I adore the imagery that you created with the sun and fog. It's overall a great ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 2

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... I don't get how that disease where the magic becomes too overwhelming and so they can't ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Across Worlds - Chapter 32 Part 1

    Hello, Noelle! KatyaElefant here for another review! Let's see what we have right here... Why did Aidan work for Rhys in the first place? I mean, Aidan said that he ...

    Mar 6, 2015


And don't forget it's hydrate or diedrate
— zaminami