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Re: BOYS' First Love...
Hello. :) Your poem was awesome. First of all, it was quite humorous. Well, when I read the title, I thought it would be something like a love at first ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: How Long? ~CONTEST ENTRY~
Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review. I simply loved your work. It is nicely written and the emotions are aptly described. And most of all, though it is ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: hopeless
Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review. :) Well, to start with, I am quite a newbie to this and I just liked what you have written so thought ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: she and i we sailed for Ithaka
Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review :) Well, first of all, I would say that whatever I write is solely my opinion and I am quite a newbie ...
Jan 14, 2016 -
Re: The Most Misunderstood Numbers In The Whole World
Hello and welcome to YWS! Your work was just awesome! Unlike an essay, which is quite boring generally, it was like an conversation that would appeal to anybody and everybody. ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: Unsure
Hello, and welcome to YWS. Its Abhipsa, just here for a review. Before reviewing I want you to know that whatever I write is solely my opinion, so no need ...
Jan 6, 2016 -
Re: An Easy Goodbye
Hello. Though I will mark it a review, it is more or less not so. I am Abhipsa. I liked your poem. And I am sorry for you. But you ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: Slap
Hello. This is Abhipsa, just stopping by for a review. :) Your poem is unlike anything I've read, that is, if I can call it a poem. You have nicely ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: Better than the weather
Hi, this is Abhipsa, just stopping here to review your work. :) Well, reading your poem I felt as if English is not your first language. There are some places ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: King Of the Clouds
Hello, this is Abhipsa, here to review your work. :) I just loved your work! Its an amazing poem, very well thought of and nicely written. The details are very ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: "Does Chicken Kiev Originate From Kiev?"
Hi this is Abhipsa, just stopping by for a review. Iam a newbie to reviewing, but I like it though. But to be honest your work doesn't require a comment. ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: It Was Said Casually!
Hello. this is Abhipsa, here to review your work. :) Before starting I want you to know that whatever I write is solely my opinion and you don't need to ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Toys
Hello, this is Abhipsa, here to review your poem :) Its a very imaginative poem. Through this simple writing you tend to bring back the childhood memories that one pines ...
Dec 28, 2015 -
Re: Evie summers novel Gifted Chapter one
hello. :) It was a nice story. Though there are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors at several places, but they can always be corrected. You have done a ...
Dec 22, 2015 -
Re: December is always the worst
Hello :) Overall your poem is strongly worded and quite a good read. But certain things I found that I felt I ought to mention, which I assure you is ...
Dec 22, 2015
