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Abhipsa

Abhipsa

  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: BOYS' First Love...

    Hello. :) Your poem was awesome. First of all, it was quite humorous. Well, when I read the title, I thought it would be something like a love at first ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: How Long? ~CONTEST ENTRY~

    Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review. I simply loved your work. It is nicely written and the emotions are aptly described. And most of all, though it is ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: hopeless

    Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review. :) Well, to start with, I am quite a newbie to this and I just liked what you have written so thought ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: she and i we sailed for Ithaka

    Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review :) Well, first of all, I would say that whatever I write is solely my opinion and I am quite a newbie ...

    Jan 14, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Humor, Science Re: The Most Misunderstood Numbers In The Whole World

    Hello and welcome to YWS! Your work was just awesome! Unlike an essay, which is quite boring generally, it was like an conversation that would appeal to anybody and everybody. ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Culture, General Re: Unsure

    Hello, and welcome to YWS. Its Abhipsa, just here for a review. Before reviewing I want you to know that whatever I write is solely my opinion, so no need ...

    Jan 6, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: An Easy Goodbye

    Hello. Though I will mark it a review, it is more or less not so. I am Abhipsa. I liked your poem. And I am sorry for you. But you ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Slap

    Hello. This is Abhipsa, just stopping by for a review. :) Your poem is unlike anything I've read, that is, if I can call it a poem. You have nicely ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Better than the weather

    Hi, this is Abhipsa, just stopping here to review your work. :) Well, reading your poem I felt as if English is not your first language. There are some places ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Humor Re: King Of the Clouds

    Hello, this is Abhipsa, here to review your work. :) I just loved your work! Its an amazing poem, very well thought of and nicely written. The details are very ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Other » General, General Re: "Does Chicken Kiev Originate From Kiev?"

    Hi this is Abhipsa, just stopping by for a review. Iam a newbie to reviewing, but I like it though. But to be honest your work doesn't require a comment. ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: It Was Said Casually!

    Hello. this is Abhipsa, here to review your work. :) Before starting I want you to know that whatever I write is solely my opinion and you don't need to ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Toys

    Hello, this is Abhipsa, here to review your poem :) Its a very imaginative poem. Through this simple writing you tend to bring back the childhood memories that one pines ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Evie summers novel Gifted Chapter one

    hello. :) It was a nice story. Though there are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors at several places, but they can always be corrected. You have done a ...

    Dec 22, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: December is always the worst

    Hello :) Overall your poem is strongly worded and quite a good read. But certain things I found that I felt I ought to mention, which I assure you is ...

    Dec 22, 2015


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