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Re: The Sun Is Still Gonna Rise, Then Why Not?
Hello and welcome to YWS! :) I'm just speechless after reading your work. It is just awesome. I actually cried (You can call me a bit over - sentimental if ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: parturient
Hi, Abhipsa here for a review :) Before starting, I want to tell that all I shall write are my own thoughts so you don't need to be too serious ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: How to Fix a World Gone Wrong- The Cringeworthy Way
Hi Abhipsa here for a review (Even if this is for the review day) :) Wow! Amazingly written. You have really got a talent for writing lyrical stuff. The topic ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Waiting
Hi, Abhipsa here for a review (For this review day) :) To start with, I liked the title of the poem. Well, after all that's what made me look into ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: How the Marigold Lost its Sun: Ch. 2
Hi, Abhipsa here for a review :) I don't think this review would be very substantial because I'm in a haste. I will just tell you what I liked about ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Hurting 'Sweet Past'
Hello, Abhipsa here for a review :) To start with, it was amazingly written. Everything - the scene and the emotions of the protagonist are so well described. One can ...
Jun 23, 2016 -
Re: Examination day :)
Hello and welcome to YWS! :) Abhipsa here for a review I must say that you have done a brilliant job. Everything is so well described from the beginning till ...
Jun 23, 2016 -
Re: Chase
Hey, Abhipsa here for a review :) Before starting, I want to tell you whatever I write are solely my own perceptions and you don't need to be too serious ...
Jun 20, 2016 -
Re: Stupid Shop
Hi, here is Abhipsa, just stopping by for a review. :) First of all, I am very fond of writing rhyming poems so this one definitely caught my eye. I ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: Somebody Else
Hello and welcome to YWS! This is Abhipsa, here for a review. :) Before I start, I want to tell you that all I write are purely my own thoughts ...
Apr 27, 2016 -
Re: The Color Grey
Hi, here is Abhipsa just for a review! First of all, welcome to YWS! Congratulations on your thoughts. I have read poets personifying many objects, but personifying a color is ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Endless Nightmare
Hello, I'm Abhipsa here for a review. :) Before I start, I want to tell you that whatever I write are solely my own thoughts. So you don't need to ...
Apr 24, 2016 -
Re: Forever? are you sure?
Hi, this is Abhipsa, here for a review! :) Overall I liked your poem. From your description I expected the poem to describe some of the things that last forever. ...
Apr 22, 2016 -
Re: White and Gold
Hello, I am Abhipsa here for a review. I liked your rhyming sense. It was a really delightful poem to read and disappointing because you ended it so quickly. Another ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: For better, for worse
Hello :) Haha.. I can't stop laughing! That was hilarious. When I read the description ''romantic'', I thought it to be a romantic poem where the couple were in some ...
Jan 14, 2016
