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Re: Colours of life .
Hi, I am here for a quick review. The first line itself turned me off. Life is so rich. We live in an abundant, continually expanding universe. Look around a ...
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Re: Odd
Hi Kenziefavaloro, here's a quick review for this. I have only positive things to say about this piece of writing. You don't know how much I can relate to this. ...
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Re: Happiness Is a Choice
Hi Niteesh, here's a quick review for this. Everyone wants to be happy, yet joy is elusive for most people. One reason is that people tend to expect their happiness ...
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Re: Dear world,
Hello, Amira. Here's a quick review for your article. To be real honest, I didn't like the structure of your article. It sounded kind of bland. Make sentences and use ...
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Re: Mother
Hi honeymoon, here's a quick review for your poem. When I first read the title 'Mother', I thought it was gonna be about how mothers are so special, you know ...
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Re: The Sadness
Hi wanderingminds, here's a quick review for your writing. Okay, first off, Wowww, that is so beautifully written. It's like you have printed your feelings into a paper and I ...
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Re: Peculiar
Hi OreosAreLife!!! This poem is really beautiful and I really liked it. People are gonna judge you for different things, even if you are in your pajamas or in your ...
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Re: The Pain Will End
Hi KFdreams02!!! It is so beautifully when pain is tried to be described, with no words or actions but just a painting or drawing. So, it is basically an angel ...
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Re: Agonies of being a writer.
Hi alexblackwell ! I wanna review your beautifully written poem. I understand how frustrating a writer's block can be, it just makes you want to give up. This poem is ...
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Re: For every 'yes' your heart says ,there comes a 'no' from your brain
Hi, Niteesh. I would like to review your poem. So, I understand you wanted to write about the dilemma that occurs because of the things that the heart wants us ...
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Re: Vessel
Hi Aleta! I will be reviewing your article, today. The first sentence "A vessel is a hollow container used to store liquid." turns you off automatically. So, try to write ...
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Re: Just a birthday
Hi, Spartan 118. I am here to review your poem. "Another year alive, yet a " Sentences like this really distracted me. I don't understand if you're trying to be ...
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Re: Art is Emotion
The topic you chose to write about is really good. Yes, art is unnecessary. It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things which gives value to ...
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Re: What about life??!!
Hiii ! I understand you just wrote how you felt and baam, here's the article/essay. And the gist of this article is nice as well. But, you have written it, ...
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Re: My first poem on this website! :)
The things you want to express through this piece of writing is beautiful. People who are suicidal can really relate to this. But the structure of this poem is not ...
Apr 20, 2017
