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Aaraju

  • Article / Essay » Literature, Realistic Re: Colours of life .

    Hi, I am here for a quick review. The first line itself turned me off. Life is so rich. We live in an abundant, continually expanding universe. Look around a ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Art » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Odd

    Hi Kenziefavaloro, here's a quick review for this. I have only positive things to say about this piece of writing. You don't know how much I can relate to this. ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: Happiness Is a Choice

    Hi Niteesh, here's a quick review for this. Everyone wants to be happy, yet joy is elusive for most people. One reason is that people tend to expect their happiness ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Other, Realistic Re: Dear world,

    Hello, Amira. Here's a quick review for your article. To be real honest, I didn't like the structure of your article. It sounded kind of bland. Make sentences and use ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Mother

    Hi honeymoon, here's a quick review for your poem. When I first read the title 'Mother', I thought it was gonna be about how mothers are so special, you know ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Other » Spiritual, Lyrical Re: The Sadness

    Hi wanderingminds, here's a quick review for your writing. Okay, first off, Wowww, that is so beautifully written. It's like you have printed your feelings into a paper and I ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Peculiar

    Hi OreosAreLife!!! This poem is really beautiful and I really liked it. People are gonna judge you for different things, even if you are in your pajamas or in your ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Art » Realistic, Spiritual Re: The Pain Will End

    Hi KFdreams02!!! It is so beautifully when pain is tried to be described, with no words or actions but just a painting or drawing. So, it is basically an angel ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Agonies of being a writer.

    Hi alexblackwell ! I wanna review your beautifully written poem. I understand how frustrating a writer's block can be, it just makes you want to give up. This poem is ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: For every 'yes' your heart says ,there comes a 'no' from your brain

    Hi, Niteesh. I would like to review your poem. So, I understand you wanted to write about the dilemma that occurs because of the things that the heart wants us ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Culture Re: Vessel

    Hi Aleta! I will be reviewing your article, today. The first sentence "A vessel is a hollow container used to store liquid." turns you off automatically. So, try to write ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Other » General, General Re: Just a birthday

    Hi, Spartan 118. I am here to review your poem. "Another year alive, yet a " Sentences like this really distracted me. I don't understand if you're trying to be ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Art is Emotion

    The topic you chose to write about is really good. Yes, art is unnecessary. It has no survival value; rather it is one of those things which gives value to ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, General Re: What about life??!!

    Hiii ! I understand you just wrote how you felt and baam, here's the article/essay. And the gist of this article is nice as well. But, you have written it, ...

    Apr 20, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: My first poem on this website! :)

    The things you want to express through this piece of writing is beautiful. People who are suicidal can really relate to this. But the structure of this poem is not ...

    Apr 20, 2017


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— Homer Simpson