ANADIR

Woo Hoo!!!! A longer chapter this time! Awesome, It's everything that i wanted :D And... "satanic mistake for an educational center" Is the best name for a school that I ...

"Voice That Haunts My Dreams" You. Are. The. Best. Nickname. Maker. In. The. History. Of. All. Books. That. I. Have. Read. Exept for maybe the hamburger lord. I have to ...

This chapter is great! As i mentioned before though, I wish these were a bit longer... I WANT MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE. As Deanie wrote, I noticed that your chapters actually have a ...

Ok, I see what you meant when you said that you had a chapter with only 2 lines in it. Still, I like it just as much as your other ...

Demon Witch from Hell. Let me just think about that for a moment... That is the best name to come up with after suddenly waking up. Beautiful! BUT. BUT BUT ...

lol That's the first thing I have to say. Your writing style is amusing and fun, and I find it very likable. I love how you're seperating their personalities the ...

Great start! It's a great hook... LOL I'm not going to leave much of a critical review here, since I don't see much that I would ever make better! However, ...

"Shael, you fucking bastard, what are you doing here." WHY, I AM TELLING YOU TO STOP BEING A SAUSAGE AND MAN UP. (Oh no, I did it again. I added ...

Welcome to the near future! You can come in here and die. (Is still trying to add bad finishes to other peoples work) Hello there! You've got an interesting chapter ...

AND SAW A POODLE! *Gets smacked on head* (Andy, I thought i told you to stop putting poodles into the ends of other peoples chapters!) I suppose I'll get to ...

Oh my, that hell hound doesn't seem very mellow. (Oh yes, I just DID start my review with a random rhyme. WHATCHU GONNA DO ABOUT IT? XD. Anyways, here's what ...

Oh dang. That poem just sent chills down my spine! That was very well done, but if i don't find something to blather on about, how can I review this? ...

I'm not really sure what I expected when I clicked on this, but this DOES fit the bill... XD. To be honest, I was sort of expecting a criticism on ...

Well, that certainly fits the topic of dramatic. This looks like a very interesting opening to a great book, so I am rather curious if you intend to transform this ...

Andy here, With an uncalled for, unknown, surprise review! :D (Catchy, eh?) Ok, so I saw this work lying around in the greenroom, and I felt as though it would ...