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  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: You Can't Change Me

    Very straight forward and to the point. You don't mince words. I've ready similar poems, so it's not anything grand or extremely exciting, but it is classic, and helps to ...

    Jan 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Horror, General Re: Under

    This is a great poem, very well written. First off, it flows very well. The style which you use is simple, but not un-complex in its language, and hence, not ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Remember when you loved me

    How sad. I've read about a lot of love stories, but every time someone writes something like this, I always feel the same. I love the simpleness of this poem. ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Science Project

    This definitely made me laugh, which is hard to do since I'm pretty cynical sometimes. The subject matter is always going to be interesting, and I can think of quite ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Redo

    This poem was well written. "The longer I keep the chain so tight, the stronger it seems to be. And though I yank with all my might, I cannot unwrap ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Lyrical Re: Macarena (A Poem From A Hipster's Point of View)

    First of all, the concept behind the poem is great. I love that you're using your writing to express a controversial point that will probably offend some people, that you ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Love is only a feeling.

    First off, good work. Now, I'm going to give an honest review, so please don't take anything the wrong way. The poem isn't really a poem, and it's not the ...

    Jan 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Love born from fire

    Wow, I was blown away by the ideas presented in this poem. "Screamed his heart as he looked at her, She, who’s hands were tainted with the demise of his ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Narrative Re: Rebirth

    Very beautiful. Your descriptions really transport me to this place and time, and I suddenly find myself wishing I would keel over so I could be resurrected like this. "Revived ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: That's All

    Good poem on this very overused subject. Unfortunately, like I said, it is very, very overused and hard to find something unique. I will say that your poem followed along ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: My Best Friend

    An interesting view on friendship indeed. This reminds me of the movie "Fried Green Tomatoes," if you've ever seen it. In any case, I love these lines, "So many words ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: Abstract Seasoning

    This is awesome! Personally, I don't care for Picasso's work, but I respect him as a new age artist and as someone willing to affect change. And his art is ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Jazz Hands

    This was definitely interesting, if a bit confusing. There's a lot going on and a lot of information to process, and even thought I've read this a few times, I'm ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dancing Free.

    This is a beautiful free verse poem. I love that, as the subject matter is music, the poem itself has a good beat and flows well, complimenting it. "The steps ...

    Jan 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Jakarta Underwater

    This poem is very interesting. I'm not sure what to make of it, or exactly what the message you are trying to convey is, as the interpretation I get probably ...

    Jan 20, 2014


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