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Re: Sunlight Through Concrete Rain: Part 2 (still WIP)
Hi! I've been meaning to get to this for ages; apologies that I am only getting to it now! This is a very interesting chapter that sets up the tension ...
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Re: True Romance
Hi Sebastian, hope YWS is treating you well! This is a raw and honest, unpolished account of a first love, and it has real strength because of the emotional arc. ...
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Re: WoS Chapter 1 Part 1: Zoe
HIIII I am back again. Couldn't keep away!! I really love the characters. That is the strongest point of this chapter for me, and I am so excited to get ...
Aug 29 -
Re: TEETH / 2018: chapter 2
OKAY, COLOUR ME (even more) INTRIGUED. This is so good, and so unique, and I need more right now. The fleshy throat-mouth thing in Chrissie's wardrobe is written with almost ...
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Re: World of Souls - Prologue
Omg, so hello, I am finally getting here... I am gonna admit I don't know what Digimon is. Well, I know it's a franchise and a TV show, but beyond ...
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Re: Skunk Candy / Prodigal Son
Hi Viv! I read this poem yesterday, and it left such an impact that I had to go away and think about it for a while before I left a ...
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Re: Her Final Moments
Hi! I'm here to review this piece of fanfiction this morning! Now, I have never seen Loki, but I think I know what it's about! Sylvie's sadness and heartbreak really ...
Aug 28 -
Re: This Shouldn't Be Possible! [Ch. VI, Nine]
soRRY it took me so long to get to the next chapter... life.... work... boring... blah. This was a very overwhelming chapter - IN A GOOD WAY - but also ...
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Re: Back when the sky was bigger
Ooh I am excited to review this song, I don't see many on here! This is a very melancholic song about growing up and the world not feeling the same ...
Aug 27 -
Re: The saddest shade of blue
Hi! This is a really interesting poem. The metaphor is very strong, and I love the fact you build up some mythology around it! I'm the color of the sky ...
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Re: A Foolish Wish
I like how you subvert the expectations of a romantic poem and make it the opposite: someone realising they no longer love a person, and all the reasons why. I ...
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Re: Lolanthe’s origin: The Laurence family’s deepest woes
Hi Creeper!!! I'm back... again! I love the atmosphere of this piece. The atmosphere is prioritised over the plot, and it makes a nice change. There's a lot of beautiful ...
Aug 24 -
Re: Chapter Three, Part Two — Garrick
Hi! I'm back again. I enjoyed the last few chapters I reviewed of this story, so I am excited to get stuck into some more. I liked the pace of ...
Aug 24 -
Re: Choosing Guilt Over Regret
Learning to set boundaries is one of the hardest things we ever have to do. When we sacrifice our ability to say "no," we slowly lose our true selves just ...
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Re: Scary Home
Hi there, I'm here to review your poem today. This is a very sad poem, and I hope (if this is true and about your life) that you are somewhere ...
Aug 24
