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This poem was so powerful. The Emotions were so strong and apparent. Though I do not relate directly to drink, this did strike pretty close to home and helped the ...

Hey! I liked the rhyme scheme in this poem. Internal rhyme is often hard to do but you did it well in some places. However, i think it would have ...

This poem was so emotive, and it's clear that when you wrote it you were trying to get across the emotions that it portrays which you did very well. I ...

Hey, first of, i really loved your poem! It had some really amazing imagery and I could really feel the emotions shining through. The enjambment added a great effect on ...

hey there! Che here to review your poem! Well, I say review, but there isn't really anything or me to say other than WOW There's nothing i can critique. I ...

hey! This is pretty amazing poem considering it's your first one! First of all, I'd just like to point out in the line "It all in the same" you probably ...

I just had to read this when I saw you said it had been inspired by Sherlock Holmes! I genuinely think this is amazing. The description was great and really ...

Hi there! First of all, it does make me what to read on! So well done with that :-) However, I do think it would have been better in past ...

First of all, you should really work on structure. You should put it into separate into paragraphs in order to make it easier to read, and follow. One big chunk ...

First of all, I'd just like to point out that in the first line you put "other" when i think you meant "others" :-) There was a lot of long ...

Hey there! This was genuinely a brilliant poem. I loved the structure, and the repetition of "I don't care" and everything else that was repeated. I especially liked the last ...

This was a very beautiful poem, in my opinion :-) I liked the soft, yellowish imagery in the beginning, though I do think more emphasis on those colours could have ...

This story flowed very well, your choice of language and how you weaved it all together was very professional and I felt as though I were reading something from an ...

I really liked this poem! I especially liked the enjambment, as it made it quite an emotional read, in my opinion. I also loved the colourful imagery you portrayed. Just ...

I really like this poem! The only slight problem I can see is that the rhyme scheme doesn't seem 100% consistent, as in the first four lines it seems to ...