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Hey there! So I finally got to part four! Yay :-) I'll just start by pointing out anywhere I think you could do with a little improving etc. Mrs. Sriti ...

Hey there! This chapter made me smile, as it was such a sweet and innocent thing that the MC did. Again, I love how you make such simple things about ...

Hey there :-) I really liked the opening paragraph in this chapter, as it explained to me how Primary Schools in Bangladesh are usually set out, as I was a ...

Hey there, I thought I'd go through and read each chapter and review them before I get to chapter 4 as that way I actually know the characters and story! ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review! I'll start by saying that I absolutely loved this poem. The structure, the form, the words, everything! I thought it read rather like ...

Hey there! Che here for a quick review. :-) I'll start by pointing out any grammatical errors I spot and areas I think could use some rewording :-) The dark ...

Hey there! Che here for a quick review! :-) I'll start by pointing out any places I think you could do with improving. I was careful, I couldn’t run too ...

Hi there, Che here for a quick review :-) I'll start by just pointing out any areas that I think may need a little improvement. I tightened my grip on ...

Hi! Che here for a quick review. I'll just start by pointing out some errors I spotted whilst reading your poem. While the wax, just melts down to nothing, I ...

Hey, Che here for a quick review :-) The joyful shrieks of the girls around her rising above the constant hearty thrum of the great steam oven that baked the ...

Hey, Che here for a real quick review :-) I'll start by saying that this poem flowed really, really well. I always find that when a poem flows well, it ...

Hey there, Che here for a quick review. Sorry it took me so long to getting round to review this third part but I'm finally here :-) Firstly, I really ...

Hey there, Che here for a quick review :-) I would just like to make some criticisms of the first paragraph to begin with :-) Hayden had asked Miranda to ...

Hello there! Che here for a quick review. First of all, I really adored this piece. It reads almost like a monologue you'd have to perform in drama class! It ...

Hey there! Che here for a quick review :-) Romance isn't my favourite genre but I will never say no to reading it, because I love reading anything aha. Firstly, ...