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Hey there! Green here for a review of this chapter! I did go back and read the previous chapters to get an idea of the story so far, but it ...

Your poem Lovewell's Song s a beautifully crafted poem that tells the story of a tragic love affair. The poem's structure is organized into stanzas that vary in length, with ...

introduction wow this was a really emotional and impactful chapter! I hadn't read any of the previous chapters but I did go back and read through them. This novel so ...

Okay, WOW! What an absolutely dark and twisted piece of fiction which is obviously rooted in a lot of areas that are topical and prevalent today. This was super impactful ...

“I can think of many reasons,” Shane said. “Such as, everyone in this place looks like they know how to kill us or are rich and willing enough to pay ...

This chapter begins with Clarity causing an explosion in her laboratory, and they discuss her failed spell experiment. They then shift to the topic of a significant artifact discovery that ...

oo so I see we are back in Cyrin and Mireya's perspective after a couple of chapters mainly focusing on the heirs and their antics. I like the opening and ...

“Hmm, yeah, that is a problem,” Kaja agreed. “Have you tried moving your head towards the wall and back really fast? I can even do it for you.” I feel ...

“I’m looking for someone. Sarcastic, medium-length black hair, short but pretends she isn’t, has probably been rude to a few people already, wearing a leather jacket even though it’s freezing ...

In this chaper, the characters are discussing the discovery of a powerful artifact called the First Spell. The artifact was discovered accidentally by two thieves who were hired to steal ...

In this chapter, we see the characters discussing a news report about a recent explosion in the city that was caused by magic. They discuss the increasing crime rate in ...

Here for another review! I really must go back to the beginning and catch up- the opening I thought that the opening to this paragraph wrapped up really nicely. It ...

>autumnleaf: just don’t pick your favorite quilt of course! i want you to have that I really like the idea of these messages and the way it's structured throughout the ...

Hi there! It took me a while to form my thoughts to write as a review as I wanted to approach the topic with as much sensitivity as it deserved. ...

Your poem paints a really charming picture of a carefree and happy chicken, going about its day and enjoying simple pleasures like 'poking about in the hay' and eating from ...