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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Mind

    ITS REVIEW TIME!!! This poem is quite deep. I really enjoyed it. I like how you italicized the last like word of each paragraph which gives these words more meaning. ...

    Mon May 08, 2017 10:20 pm
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I******** POEM

    It's review time!!!! Woah this is really cool. I've never read a poem like this before it is quite unique. After reading it I instantly smiled not that the content ...

    Mon May 08, 2017 10:15 pm
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: I******** POEM

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    Woah this is really cool. I've never read a poem like this before it is quite unique. After reading it I instantly smiled not that the content was happy but ...

    Mon May 08, 2017 10:13 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Not Sorry

    I really like the idea's behind this poem, but it seems a little unfinished. I think you could develop your ideas more, use stronger word choice and maybe other literary ...

    Mon May 08, 2017 10:09 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Would Like to Thank My Thoughts

    Hey! This poem was sort of sad. It had so much depth to it. Writing is a great way to express your feelings and is one of the things that ...

    Mon Mar 28, 2016 6:26 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: viii - forgotten

    This poem is really cool!!! I love the idea of it, but I don't really understand what it is about. Some poems I think though are meant to be not ...

    Mon Mar 28, 2016 6:23 pm
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Narrative Re: The plain canvas

    Wow!!! This poem is really good. I love how it's one of those poems full of depth and you don't necessarily understand it when you just read it once. It ...

    Mon Mar 28, 2016 6:20 pm
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: I wish

    Wow honestly this is one of the best poems I read. I love how this poem can relate to so many readers including me. It reminds me of how I ...

    Sun Mar 27, 2016 1:58 am
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Romantic Re: The depths of her hell

    Wow this is really good!!! REVIEW TIME: Something I would say you could maybe change is too make it flow more. The poem is great there are just some parts ...

    Sun Mar 27, 2016 1:51 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Last Thought of Us

    TIME FOR A REVIEW!!!! I just wanted to start out by saying this is a wonderful poem! Though it is very short it feels loud. I know most girls can ...

    Wed Dec 23, 2015 2:33 am
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Thoughts.

    Hey! It's time for a review!! This poem is just wow! I can really relate to this because I struggle with OCD. I know how hard it is to have ...

    Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:26 am
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Humor Re: Youth's explanation for over speeding!

    Wow!!! Hey!!! It's time for a review!!! I really liked this poem. Where did you come up with the idea for this? It is like nothing I have ever heard ...

    Sat Nov 07, 2015 4:22 am
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Exclusively For You

    Hey!!! It's time for a review! OMG!!! This is a really good poem. You hooked me right way with your poem and immediately I wanted to read more. Your language ...

    Sat Nov 07, 2015 3:54 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Mirror

    Hey! It's time for a review! This is one of the best poems I've ever read! I love how you wrote in two perspectives i think it gives more detail ...

    Sat Nov 07, 2015 3:39 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If water were hate

    ITS TIME FOR A REVIEW....... Wow I really like this poem. See that is one of the amazing things about poetry is that your ideas have a purpose to them ...

    Fri Nov 06, 2015 4:07 am


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