I may be hurt
But I’m not weak.
I may forgive
But I never forget.
I may not be perfect
But I’m thankful.
I may laugh all the time
But I’m not always happy.
I may be alone
But I’m not lonely
I may not love my life
But I don’t hate the idea of living either.
I may not trust everyone
But I do believe in who I am.
I may make mistakes
But unlike you, I learn from them.
For me Living is a big deal,
But Loving is a bigger one.
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Wow honestly this is one of the best poems I read. I love how this poem can relate to so many readers including me. It reminds me of how I have this best friend who I love to death but sometimes we are lost in our relationship. This was just so touching and I keep wanting to read it over and over again. I like how you had a pattern going at the beginning and then towards the end changed it up. It really helped give your poem some edge and made it more interesting. Also you title was really good and I was hooked from there.
Thanxs a lot!
Very touching poem. Great thinking and penning. You carved into words like anyone can feel it in real. And it's very true as Almost everyone had experienced it. The best lines which touched my soul
"I may not trust everyone
But I do believe in who I am."
Nice piece of writing. Keep up there s good work . hope to read many more from you. Blessings!
Thanx a zillion !