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I would really appreciate it if you could review my essay. I wrote it for a school assignment and am in a desperate need for feedback.

Link:
Comparison between Fahrenheit 451's Society and Ours - an essay

- Mira

Hi Mea !

I really like the reviews I've received from you, I was hoping you could review the second draft of this first villanelle I wrote — Last walk (2nd draft)

I don't need anything too detailed , just some main pointers for a next draft. I'm just trying to perfect the work since editing is my weak point.

Thanks!

Hi @Mea,

Are you still accepting requests?

If you are could you take a look at this chapter of my novel: The Sorcerers of Hisderat, Chapter 3

Hi Mea!
If you're accepting review requests, I'd be really grateful if you could review my short story Thought Patterns
Thank you for your time in advance.

Please review this short story/ flash fiction (depending on your definition of either one) a friend of mine has asked me to write this for her art exibit, and I really wanna iron it out for her.

It is the Nature of the Universe

Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)

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