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Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Jase grabbed Josephine by the wrist and led both girls into the trees, the smell of sulfur engulfing them as if they were in an ...

The truth behind who everyone assumes is a bright warm fire. But is instead a shadowy serpent.

hey there, I'm just dropping by for a quick review : ) First off, I really liked this story. I thought it was endearing and I thought that the interactions ...

Kita doesn't know how to react...

I am going through a similar situationship right now. “'You never listen.' You said. 'I do…you’re the one who never listens…..'" This line makes me feel not alone. It really ...

Sasha Merlot Collabed with @Spearmint Sasha skirted her way between two rooftop gardens, trying her best not to trample the vegetables as she swiftly made her way to the edge ...

This poem really explores the human nature and how love can be easilly chnged to obsession. It is a dangerous line that one must walk, and have to be careful. ...

This work is top notch! I love the mix of dreams and reality. It shows that love is as much a dream as it is a reality! You have to ...

First things first, THE TITLE!!! absolutely LOVE it. It leaves you guessing, especially because when people are talking about "those three words" we automatically assume its "I Love You" but ...

This Poem is absolutely amazing! and the imagrey of "I pray for my skull to give way at the soft parts, implode at the seams"...YIKES! The visually image of the ...

XD that'll be fun You're all good! just wanted to make sure there wasn't anything else you wanted to add in! It'll be up soon!

I Love the line "This mask, a beaming, welcoming grin" really emphasizes that underneath the mask is anything but. This work really delves into thoughts and emotions of someone who ...

When you are forced to hide what you really feel...

Hello, my fellow writing friend! A Little Skimming - First Impressions I just want to say it now, I didn't read the previous chapters of this, so I am not ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine had never seen someone more handsome than the specimen standing in front of them. His eyes were a cloudy gray, and his stark-black hair ...