Young Writers Society

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary Josephine had never seen someone more handsome than the specimen standing in front of them. His eyes were a cloudy gray, and his stark-black hair ...

Hello, my fellow writing friend! A Little Skimming - First Impressions Wow! This was a truly deep and poetic piece. Even the title could be a poem of it's own! ...

Aloha ToastK! Rose here with a review for this interesting story :] I. First Things First First and foremost, let’s talk about the awesome stuff. :D I've read the first ...

Day 21 Napo. I didn't expect any of them to be good, but here we go

Sovereign Written by @JazzElectrobass and @Spearmint Peasants. Measley peasants. Do they not think she'd been ruling fairly? Were people that senseless that they were so ungrateful? It was utterly rid

B392 does something absolutely and utterly disgusting, Sage brings a new member to the crew. When will Alice ever come home?

This chapter was heck to write, but I'm relatively content with how it's turned out.

When you can't reach the train handles and a convenient arm is right there...

Nice work done by the author (as always). All your poems are just amazing. This whole poem would sound so cool as a rap. "The clowns are doing their job ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary This is probably one of my favorite chapters so far! It had me hooked from beginning to end! From the anticipation up to the fight ...

A few things: first is formatting feedback. I'd take out the 'chapter x's because the story flows much better without the addition of the titles and honestly, in my experience, ...

05/06/24 everything I see here is just a half-truth. I watch you lunge for the next photo, contorting your people into poses—a hand on a shoulder, mouths gaping with laughter, ...

I read the first paragraph and instantly thought wow. Your use of descriptive language is sooo amazing!!!! The vocabulary, chefs kiss! I mean just take a look at the wording ...

Hello again! ~ Writing Commentary “I see. Well, the other girls are in the powder room to your left, but you may help yourself to any outfits in the dressing ...

He would figure it out eventually; how to find a home.

Oh wow! That kind of took me by surprise. Firstly, the tone of the story is amazing! almost feels a little past tense, which adds to the overall impact of ...