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Hello, this is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your work. First of all, I do think the formatting can make the story pretty confusing. I ...

How many tear stains are on your pillow?

Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give a review/comment about your poem. This reminds me of my bathroom thoughts while the shower runs cold and noisy, tapping ...

Hello! This is AkuRashomon, and I am here to give you a review/comment of your work. This konda reminds me of the chat room in YWS, lol. I have seen ...

If you could make a story start and end with the same sentence, what would it be? some ideas: "I'll always love you." "I will never forget you."

First Impression💕: Umm, I understand that this is a horror piece, via the gore and blood. It's not terrible, however, it's not good either. The piece evokes a sense of ...

Chapter 5 of the Rotten world series.

Wow this was looong, but i dont regret it. Wow, this is an incredibly intense and emotional story of love, heartbreak, and self-discovery. It's raw and honest, capturing the rollercoaster ...

DAY 14 GRADUATING..... School is fun, It's fun when you're no. 1. School is tiring, Yet it is inspiring. School makes me wake for another day, But my world seems ...

The way you have written it is very nice! I liked the usage of various synonyms to get your point across. The flow of the story is really steady and ...

Chapter 4 of the Rotten World.

This story is really intense! It starts with the main character having these creepy nightmares about a shadowy figure, and then things get even scarier when the figure starts showing ...

This story feels like a peek into a day in the life of Simone and her friends. Simone seems to really enjoy the outdoors and hanging out with her friends, ...

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Stacy doesn’t want to live like she’s from the 1800s, all she wants is a normal life…but why is the candle flame glowing strangely so?

Hello there, Koco! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Shalt we commence with the possessed S’more? Top Graham Cracker - Quinzel makes the decision to stop Joan from ...