Young Writers Society

okay, this isn't one of my best pieces, but I'm considering using it at the beginning of a new story, so i need a lot of reviews (p.s.-this is my ...

This is different from the other Ocean Song. It just happened that we picked the same title. I would have changed it, but it's so perfect that I had to ...

This is my first attempted at a story, so I'm just warning you, it might be a bit pathetic. And this prolouge is short, but it's kind of like an ...

Here's chapter one if you want to read it. You don't have to, but if you don't you probably won't understand the first few paragraphs I hope you like it! ...

When I look Upon your face, I see a melancholy woman Who has never stood For the right causes. When I look Upon your face, I see a mediocre mind ...

Can anyone tell me how i can delete this?

This One’s For You. I feel this tickle in my stomach Ticklish, yet soar With every growing minute It hurts my notion’s hearts core. I’ve tossed those drops of tears ...

Keeper of your own hell. Stainless steel bars assigned in black coloring – eyelashes. Feathery lids in forms of strong steel close in on its devil–unknown. Powered-up solely, with its ...

There are just some parts of this that seem a bit awkward to me, but an outside opinion would really help! Chapter one, part one ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ CHAPTER ONE GRADUA

Hey! I have been working on this for ages, then suddenly and violently fell out with it! I think i've seen it too many times, I now truly hate it. ...

This is a short piece I wrote in regards to almost losing my mother. I love her with all my heart and am happy that she is safe(: Hey Mom, ...

you used to say you'd love me eternity i guess an eternity is much shorter than you thought you broke my heart and you're still the one i will always ...

A short, short story partially based off my real neighbors. Is the title too weak? Let me know what you think. The woman upstairs is vacuuming again. It is the ...

PROLOGUE There are too many vampire stories in the world. Mine is of another sort of demon, monster, whatever you would like to call us. But in nature, we are ...

A black shape in the blue ocean The universal mass My companion Many times my size Speaking -Through thought Thought alone- Fought with no one Tethered to the tale And ...