Published June 24, 2008
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Ah Supernatural! OMG! I love this show! The title was what pulled me in, I'm curious did you go with "Wayward" because in the season three finale (No Rest For the Wicked) they played that song? I don't know just wondering.
Anyways I liked this. It was good.. It makes me kind of sad because I mean, poor Dean. He is my favorite..I just want to cry for what happened to him in your story. *tear tear* I liked how it kind of explained why Dean is who he is now and all that stuff..but I mean poor Dean..
And he was a goodlooking kid the way Sammy had never been.
-haha aw Sammy..hehe I agree Dean is cuter, where you going off the looks of the kids in the "A Very Supernatural Christmas" episode? At least I'm pretty sure that is the one where they show the flashbacks a lot...
I liked how at the end you tied it into the episode "In My Time of Dying," I thought that was good and gave the story some relevance and wasn't just a random snipit from the past. And I liked that it was John telling the story, especially since we don't see so much of him anymore and it puts some logic behind why he did what he did, besides the fact that Dean was his son..
Yes, good, I like it! Keep writing!