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I know something is wrong with this poem. I just cant figure it out. Will you give me suggestions? >When I was at my worst You showed me the light ...
armonia - Nov 16, 2005 - 1 min read
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I wrote this last year a while back... Around this time of year, right before my birthday or so... I took the comments I recieved into consideration and this is ...
Elizabeth - Nov 16, 2005 - 2 min read
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She She stands there still Her crow black hair a shadow vagrant to the world Her soul is chill And plain to see, heralded by dark flag unfurled Eyes colder ...
Meta-Messiah - Nov 16, 2005 - 1 min read
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I've not wrote for a few months, I had block. Situation: I was bored out of my mind yesterday with the Gastric flu so I decided to write some poetry. ...
Whatsarahsaid - Nov 16, 2005 - 1 min read
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Here, it's short, and I might add more lines. If i'm ever bored in Literature again... In this mirror My reflection shows me Everything That I don't want to be.
Snip Snip - Nov 15, 2005 - 1 min read
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You don’t know I’m there, but I’m watching You can’t tell, but I love you more then you know I might be far away but I’m closer then you think ...
armonia - Nov 15, 2005 - 1 min read
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As I wait on the bench, my arms handcuffed As I look around the dark room, shivering I begin to think of what's ahead of me My fate. I didn’t ...
Armadian - Nov 15, 2005 - 2 min read
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I'm not sure how good this really is, I wrote it yesterday, one of my first poems ever... I mostly write prose/songs and yeah...tear it apart to your hearts delight... ...
BettyPaige - Nov 15, 2005 - 1 min read
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I thought this was going to be happy, dammit! Anyway, it's good. I like it better than many of your poetry, mostly because the style is a little bit more ...
Snoink - Nov 15, 2005 - 1 min read
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A winter night's tale The moon shimmers through the branches Of the old dry tree beside the meadow The sky looks gorgeous when compared To the frozen nerved earth below. ...
torsa_n_muse - Nov 14, 2005 - 1 min read
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shadows before the sun, and someoneturns out the lightsdarkness settles on the stage: a new act has begun.cue – daylightlet a shred of pale grey fill the sky.I can see ...
bubblewrapped - Nov 14, 2005 - 1 min read
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You draw me into your words Your thoughts, and your poetry With your blue eyes And I love them. It’s almost a seduction dance When you look at me across ...
Once Upon A Dream - Nov 14, 2005 - 1 min read
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I traced my fingers around your body but you never wanted to be called a masterpiece, You don't mean to be rude but the knife in my hand is cutting ...
Firestarter - Nov 14, 2005 - 1 min read
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I'm really not sure about this one, so any constructive criticism would be more than welcome. Light This silhouette lies beside me Faint curves of silver amidst an eternity of ...
Meta-Messiah - Nov 14, 2005 - 1 min read
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And...deleted.
thegirlwhofateloves - Nov 14, 2005 - 1 min read