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Dear Jonathon Leroux and family: This is an invitation to attend the wedding of Sir. John Edwards and Miss Elizabeth ...

I am new, and not very good at writing, but I'd like you guys to make your critiques on my ...

“This is unbelievable,” Bevan said once Magorian had crossed through the opening. He flopped down into the long grass. I ...

Chapter Four: Suspicions My heart began to thump more wild than it had before, in fear or excitement. “How did ...

Chapter Three: Clue Formed by Tears I jumped back with my lock in hand. My lock slipped and crashed to ...

Chapter Two: Lingering Horrors I saw yellow tape and smelled more smoke, only this time it smelled like hair smoke. ...

Chapter One: Misfortune has Conspired We reentered the school building. You could smell the lingering smoke throughout the hallways. Burning ...

One Night in the Life of … “We’re going out to the School after dark, again, so no, I can’t ...

If you didn't read the first two parts of my story, you might want to read them: Part I and ...

Posted: Sat Mar 05, 2005 11:16 pm Chapter One: “Well, I’ll be darned,” commented a voice from behind me. “If it isn’t Ashlee Amber Hauterive.” Now, I’ll be honest with ...

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I posted this on my other forum but nobody's critiqued it yet, so please critique it. anyway, it's actually Gone Away Home but I've posted it a million times, so ...

(where in our hero find out more about death then he would like to know) Where was I, I tried to remember something anything, but the only thing I could ...

Yeah. Here it is. So critique and rate.: Deidre coughed as the ash surrounded her. “This is like a replay of what just happened at my house!” Deidre screamed, struggling ...

I finally finished editing. I took a break from it; so it took a little long. So yeah, finally. Please critique and rate.: A thick cloud of ash poured into ...