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Here's a random scene I'll be writing on the spot, hope you enjoy it. COMMENTS/CORRECTIONS ENCOURAGED Yurok the Waywatcher pulled his cloak low over his face and gazed out from ...

Prologue The Dragons started it. They always do, though they never seem to know what it is that they are doing while they’re doing it. Afterwards they always take responsibility ...

Snow falls hard onto the cold ground on which a lone man lies down, waiting for death. It is so cold that his blood seems to freeze, no matter the ...

This is another story from my world as well. Hope you like it... Its not finished though _________________________________________ Elenor. A city of beauty, its marble towers engraved with golden runes, ...

Road Trip 1. The shadowy grass made a wet squish with each step. Thomas followed Rocky as they crossed the soccer field. “So,” Thomas said. “Where exactly are we going?” ...

i posted this before, and receieved some feedback, and changed it a little. i'd like to know what you all think, perhaps a little lengthy. Issys took the glass from ...

Here's the entire chapter. (I know you're thinking FINALLY). Half of it is 2nd draft, so beware and have fun. The more corrections I get, the better. CHAPTER 2 Word ...

New Topic cos the other one's getting a bit long.... Anyhoo, Chapter 5, fresh from the oven, not checked, full of holes probably.... -------------------- Councillor Armen was worried, for several, ...

This is the true definition of a "short story." Read and enjoy. I appreciate any and all critique, so don't be shy! Author's Note: This was written for my Reading ...

Seeker of the Blade Prologue ______________ Born of the Shadow As the sun reached its peak of noonday’s mark, a slight breeze swept across the rises of the emerald grasslands ...

Actually, this my alternate begining. My orginal has little activity and a person who likes long, lengthy, frivolous speeches. Here goes: “The sentence for murder is death!” In the shadows ...

This is an incomplete story, obviously. However i'm working out some plot plausibility things currently, so this is all i can give you. cheers. Alyce It is late in November ...

Here's an actual chapter of my new novel; sorry for cluttering up Fantasy with all these pieces, but I promise from now on, it's going to be all in chapter ...

This is a very short introduction, but I find it to be lacking somehow, perhaps I should lengthen it. Any advice would be appreciated. Issys took the glass from the ...

Ok, this is a part of my book. I wrote it in a hurry, so im aware of the gramar mistakes. I need a critic mostly on the concept and ...