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Depression happens for many different reasons; for example, loss of a job our being bullied. Depression does not only affect the person with the depression but, everyone around them. Everyone has depression at certain times and there are different ways to deal with it. Some ways are to take antidepressants and other ways are to see a psychologist. Depression can cause us to do things we would not normally do. For example, it might cause us to harm ourselves by perhaps, cutting ourselves. There are people that find enjoyment out of making us depressed because they are malicious. Personally, I think these people are crazy. But, there are people that want us to fell better. Also, depression can make us believe things that are not true, some people when they are depressed, believe that no one cares for them which, in just about all cases is untrue. Dieting and exercising can help cure depression. If you would like to contribute to this article please fell free to do so.
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A lot of people during their lives have to face depression and it's objectively normal.
Depression is caused by traumatic events, nervous breakdowns, panic, anxiety, stress, the person's reaction to the environment, sadness caused by something external and so on.
Also, people with a higher IQ usually are more inclined to develop depression.
It is a consequence of life, exactly like when you want to go to the gym and book a year of training, but the secretary tells you that you have to book at least two years. What do you do in a situation like that?
Either you accept it or quit.
These tips can help you feel better -- starting right now.
1. Get in a routine. If you’re depressed, you need a routine, says Ian Cook, MD. He's a psychiatrist and director of the Depression Research and Clinic Program at UCLA.
Depression can strip away the structure from your life. One day melts into the next. Setting a gentle daily schedule can help you get back on track.
2.Set goals. When you're depressed, you may feel like you can't accomplish anything. That makes you feel worse about yourself. To push back, set daily goals for yourself.
"Start very small," Cook says. "Make your goal something that you can succeed at, like doing the dishes every other day."
As you start to feel better, you can add more challenging daily goals.
3. Exercise. It temporarily boosts feel-good chemicals called endorphins. It may also have long-term benefits for people with depression. Regular exercise seems to encourage the brain to rewire itself in positive ways, Cook says.
4. Eat healthy. There is no magic diet that fixes depression. It's a good idea to watch what you eat, though. If depression tends to make you overeat, getting in control of your eating will help you feel better.
Although nothing is definitive, Cook says there's evidence that foods with omega-3 fatty acids (such as salmon and tuna) and folic acid (such as spinach and avocado) could help ease depression.
5. Get enough sleep. Depression can make it hard to get enough shut-eye, and too little sleep can make depression worse.
What can you do? Start by making some changes to your lifestyle. Go to bed and get up at the same time every day. Try not to nap. Take all the distractions out of your bedroom -- no computer and no TV. In time, you may find your sleep improves.
Hi! This was a little textbook- bland in places but otherwise OK.
Get rid of the second 'reason'.
'have' should be 'has'.
Consider re-phrasing. For example:
One way is to take anti-depressants, whilst some people prefer to consult a psychologist.
Please re-phrase this sentence. For example:
Also, depression can make people believe things that are not true. For example, some people start to think that no-one cares for them, which in nearly all cases is untrue.
Perhaps try adding in more about how some forms of depression can be solved by a healthy diet, keeping fit and active in both mind and body. If you need more info try some sites. I'm sure Wikipedia would have some info on depression.
Also, please try spacing it out more. This will both make it easier to read and add emphasis at certain points.
If you need any more help then feel free to pm me.
All the best,
Alainna
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