Sad song

by thething912

Published November 23, 2007

In Crappy stuff

Sorry if there are any errors. I tried to make sure there weren't any. Let me know what you think. Thanks.



Hector: “Sitting here in the flied looking at the stars.”
Hector : “I recall the days when I was four.”
Hector: “Adventure parks, fairs and lots of toys.”
Hector: “But, my days are numbered and things don’t look the way they were, back when I was four.”
Hector “Born in Arizona.”
Hector: “The people don’t know much about you, but, I like the heat as it cools my feet.”
Hector: “As I sit here I don’t see much hope but, I remember the words of the pope.”
Pope: “Come with me and you will see, that there is endless life with Jesus in heaven.”
Hector “I heard that when I was seven.”

Verus two

Hector “I wonder how the Angles will look when they come to get me”.
Hector “I wonder how holy there will be.”

Verus three.

Hector: “If only, I had a few more days to live.”
Hector: “I would teach my kids how to drive and to rope bull.”
Hector: “I just want my kids to be happy because I never was.”

Verus four.

Hector: “As I sit here the words of the pope ring in my head.”
Pope: “Come with me and you will see, that there is endless life with Jesus in heaven.”
Hector: “Well, that sound great. But, how am I supposed to believe in some something I can’t see?”

Jesus come into view.

Jesus: “Come with me and you see the adventures there will be.”

Hector walks over to Jesus.

(Conversation starts.)

Hector: “I never thought you were real.”
Jesus: “Maybe it’s time for you to start believing”
Hector: “Yeah, maybe.”

Verus five.

People’s voices sing.

Ay ay ay.
Ay ay ay.
Ay ay ay ay ay ay ay.
Ay ay ay ay.

(Conversation starts.)
Hector: “So, what adventures are there?”
Jesus: “You will see.”

Birds sing.

Birds: “Welcome to ha ha heaven.”

End of song.

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SeraphTree
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SeraphTree wrote a review Review · Dec 21, 2007

I suggest you take out the 'Hector: Jesus:' part. Instead, have the Lord's words in italics, throughout the song. That way, it can be a surprise at the end. Other than that... very interesting :D



Hope is being able to see that there is light despite all of the darkness.
— Bishop Desmond Tutu