Ok, here for a review!
There's some stuff that I have noticed...
First of all,
"The blue is the color of my tears"
Tears are actually colored silver and not blue, and if it was actually colored blue, it would be better to remove the "the" in the beginning.
Second of all,
"Back...please..."
Very minor, but add space! Back ...please.../ Back... please...
And that's it! I really enjoyed this by the way!
Points: 166
Reviews: 40
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