(CALM)
Were you looking for a man?
That has a magical hand?
A man that can take you to another land? (Stretched)
Do you want to go to the mountains?
Believe me this is not a dream….
Do you want to fly in the sky?
Just close your eyes and say the words (Stretched)
Don’t let any problems come up to you
When you are feeling alone there is only one thing to do
Leave this real world
Don’t wait for death
(Don’t wait for death to take us away)
If you will allow me
Let me take you away
(Take you away)
(Guitar Solo)
Were you looking for a man?
That has a magical hand?
A man that can offer you happiness grand? (Stretched)
Let me wipe out your tears…
This won’t hurt a bit
Let me clean out your fears…
Let me fill your heart with laughter (Stretched)
Don’t let any problems come up to you
When you are feeling alone there is only one thing to do
Leave this real world
Don’t wait for death
(Don’t wait for death to take us away)
If you will allow me
Let me take you away
(Take you away)
Hello, I am looking for a girl
With a magical hand
That can take me to another land (Stretched)
You are just like me
God made me to be
(Made me to make you feel great)
If you want to we can leave this world
(Let’s run)
If you want to we can enter in a palace made for us
(We will laugh and have fun)
Don’t let any problems come up to you
When you are feeling alone there is only one thing to do
Leave this real world
Don’t wait for death
(Don’t wait for death to take us away)
If you will allow me
Let me take you away
(Take you away)
(Second Solo)
If you will allow me…
Let me take you away….
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Great job! For this being your first love song it is very precious. Hold on to it for a long time. It might one day be the one and only move you haven't made and the one you need to. Beautiful! I give it an A plus!
I like it!It brings to mind Dio and Rush.
My only problem is that last line of the second stanza
Cream just doesn't really fit there, as I was reading I began to get into it and when I got to that line, I got the vivid mental image of a gigantic pitcher of cream.