They Must Fight
Those men have a family
They love them graciously
But it is time for them to go
Our jobs is to pray
That in this world they could stay (Stretched)
People have to go to war!
Set off the earths floor!
They fight for our right!
People that love them must hold to their prayers tight!
(Screaming) They must fight!!!
As we hold to our prayers tight!!!
They must fight!!!
Even for the wrong propaganda's!!!
They will give their lives!!!
No madder on which side are they!!!
They must fight!!!
Even though millions of the souls will have to fade away!!! (Screaming stops)
As the soldiers crying inside their hearts
Point their guns at a young teen
They must press the trigger
It’s their mission to wipe out the living figure
As the soldiers fight and weep
The dictators swim in the gold and power that’s steep
They most pass and burn all the villages
They will have process their annihilation
Destroy everything of the former free nation
But they must fight for our country
Or is that what the dictators taught us and the soldiers?
(Screaming) They must fight!!!
As we hold to our prayers tight!!!
They must fight!!!
Even for the wrong propaganda's!!!
They will give their lives!!!
No madder on which side are they!!!
They must fight!!!
Even though millions of the souls will have to fade away!!! (Screaming stops)
The soldiers must live through the horror!!!
If it’s an order they must murder!!!
In their weak crying hearts they must fire!!!
That is the stereotype dictator’s desire!!!!!!!
But they must fight for our country
Or is that what the dictators taught us and the soldiers? (Stretch)
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I listen heavy metal too. Actually I don't, I feel heavy metal. But my philosophy about war isn't quite the same as yours. I'm total opposition of war propaganda. People who're(not whoxe) sending others to war are usually politicians and people who get kill are usually ordinary people. So...do you still want to send someone to war???
Wow.
I don't even know what to say about this.
It has left me speechless.
This song format reminded me of "Waking the Demon" By Bullet For My Valintime,
But, with the war theme, the lyrics reminded me more towards
"Citizen Solider" By 3 Doors Down and "Unknown Solider" by Breaking Benjamin.
Those guys are ill and famous....
I think you have a career in song writing mister!
Wow dude, yet again...you caught me in your gripping words!
later!
This almost made me cry, no lie
I've never known anyone personally that went to war to fight for the US in Iraq, even though I live in the US for part of the year, I live in Australia most of the time so I don't know the just of the pain. I'm sure the families pray every night and day that the ones they love will come home again. I know what it's like to miss someone so badly it hurts. All you can do is pray that they'll be alright.
Very gripping
Nice Job, keep it up
-thevoiceinside
P.S. I envy the writers that can create emotion in their readers. FYI, I envy you for that. If one of my pieces made someone feel something that bettered their life, then I'd have more of a purpose to write what I love
*Screaming* that you have placed in rap,just freaked me out.This so awesome that i can't express.
Keep Going
defiitly long- like this was a rap long not a heavy metal long-
Thank you again. LOL
Awww man dude.
But mostly, I love how they are so deep, and how they portray your feelings in a unique way, instead of how everyone else does. So, really cool job! 
I always love your songs.
Especially the screaming.
Thank you
This is very strong, hopefully you put this in a poetry or lyric contest or something. Hey, Max here and I think you have true talents that is very very good.I'm actually amazed because of your age and how well you write for it. I liked the second to last verse alot because it holds alot and it is very satisfying. Just thought I should let you know and anyone is crazy to tell you this doesn't work and they hate it. I absolutly love it. It's perfect, well close enough with words. Good luck, keep writing, because if you don't it would be a terrible waste of talent.
-Max