Hey there! So I don't know much about poetry but here I am!
I want to start by saying that this piece doesn't flow very well. I find the formatting strange and the overall idea of it was a bit odd. I don't want to sound negative because I think that every author has their different styles. Also, as kostia said, it was very short so therefore I couldn't get a real idea what you were trying to say.
As I said before, I literally know NOTHING about poetry so if you feel what I said isn't accurate, ignore it.
Don't stop writing!
Your friend,
Honora
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