This White Tornado

Hiii Valkyria! I wanted to right a little review for your little limerick! This is pretty sick! I love limericks in general and this one is awesome. Not only is it short and sweet but its cute and ahh I just love it. Keep it up Valkyria I can't wait to see what you do next.

-Ellie

Ahh, a limerick I see

It is light-hearted and happy

It's well done, for sure,

With proper structure.

You did it quite nicely.


(see what I did there HAHAH)

But seriously, this is a nice limerick. Short and sweet, a great break from the seriousness of life. I like how you make light of a supposed potential natural disaster aka a tornado. You were able to make it sound cute even. I can imagine its personality already with the way you describe its grin and gave the name "Dusty". Overall, you did a great job, keeping the integrity of a limerick while making it fun to read.

This is alpacaboss, signing off.

This is very short yet so cute. It reminds me of those books I have read as a little kid about dogs. The rhymes were great. The dog you are talking about, to me, is like a big, kind, family dog. Dusty is nice name for him too. Aww, the last line about his grin is so cute especially how I imagined him to be. Overall, it sounds like a poem you would write for school. It is cute and good. Keep it up!

This is loveissourgrapes who has written a review/comment about your poem. Have a nice day/night!