I really love this poem. I think you did a fantastic job on the voice and flowing rhythm. As well, I think it is good that you repeat "Hand me your love" at the start of each stanza. Like Snoink said, you show us the difference between giving someone your love compared to your heart. I think this poem will connect with many teenagers because we don't always know the difference.
Points: 1764
Reviews: 84
Donate