Hii, right to the point i loved this omg. from the beginning you gave me an idea of what emotion to except throughout reading this and it became more stronger and clearer reading on.The blind man part i think blind part man really set this idea in stone and the presidents lies to the nation i have a feeling its about the recent happenings on this pandemic. So im glad that this poem is making me think with a clear picture so its easier. I think what i really liked about this is you added a new point to each line which usually what writers do is repeat and talk about one thing or the same thing for each other line so this was really new for me reading and it lets me know from this small bit of a poem you have a lot to say and managed somehow to turn it into something expressive and short without it being chaotic. 10/10 from me lol.
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