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by Rosendorn

Published March 5, 2009

In Poetry

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Poopsie
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Poopsie commented Comment · Oct 20, 2014

where is snoink by the way?

Snoink replied · Oct 20, 2014

This was written during Lent of 2009! I gave up YWS as a penance, and didn't make an announcement at all that I was going to disappear. People got confused and @Griffinkeeper made a blog about how I was going through electroshock therapy. So there was a lot of confusion back in the day. XD

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Griffinkeeper
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Griffinkeeper commented Comment · Mar 7, 2009

Didn't realize Snoink was a book.

A reminder that poetry fandom is fine, but comments should also have some sort of critiquing done in them.

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MeadowLark
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MeadowLark commented Comment · Mar 7, 2009

It's lovely Rosey!

You did a wonderful job. Snoink will love this. It's short, sweet and shows how much Snoink helped everyone on here. Excellent job!

Happy Writing!

Meadow

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Rosendorn
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Rosendorn commented Comment · Mar 6, 2009

Edited.

Thanks for the comments!

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Explosive_Pen
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Explosive_Pen wrote a review Review · Mar 6, 2009

Rosey Unicorn wrote:You wallow around in Homework Help,
Waiting for someone to give a yelp.
You shake off the mud and curl your tail,
Leaving behind a math-laden trail.

You sweep down and fix the headaches caused, You don't need this comma.
By pre-algebra woes and biology spells. Gasp! This doesn't rhyme, but I agree with tori: fogs would be a nice slant ryme.
Physics and chemistry, you cover it all, This comma should be a period.
On our way to an F, you've broken our fall.

We miss you a lot in Homework Help,
But it's time for you to be put on the shelf.

~Rosey


Yeah, Snoink'll love this. :D Nice job Rosey.

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RoryLegend
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RoryLegend commented Comment · Mar 5, 2009

haha haha
nicely done.

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tori1234
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tori1234 wrote a review Review · Mar 5, 2009

You wallow around in Homework Help,
Waiting for someone to give a yelp.
You shake off the mud and curl your tail,
Leaving behind a math-laden trail.

You sweep down and fix the headaches caused,
By pre-algebra woes and biology [s]spells.[/s]fogs I know it doesn't rhyme, but I think it sounds a tad bit better
Physics and chemistry, you cover it all,
On our way to an F, you've broken our fall.

We miss you a lot in Homework Help,
But it's time for you to be put on the shelf.

~Rosey


awwwww!!!!! that was SO sweet! Snoink will love it!!!!!



History repeats itself. First as tragedy, second as farce.
— Karl Marx