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Really good. I love how the third line perfectly complements the second. The fourth line is a perfect juxtaposition to the second and third.
You captured the mood of depression really good, but yet the last stanza is all about hope, which leads the viewer to read your poem "Joy".
The only mistakes I found was that you spelled look wrong in the second to last stanza, and the last stanza says "That I although it it cloudy now". Should that be "That although it is cloudy now"? I thought you may have put "I" In there by accident.
Really though, this is an exceptionally good poem. I could really sympathize with the emotions you described.
Thanks for sharing!
This is well written...if only I had the talent at all to write a poem such as your own.
I felt as though this really called out to me. You managed to capture the bad days in a perfectly worded poem. The only error I can see ERZA pointed out already. I've read your other works and they amazed me too. Keep it up!
Wow, it is really an inspirational poem. I was in such a bad mood since I am sick today and reading your poem made me feel better. This poem is all good and does not need any modifications. The only mistake I find here is that you spelled look wrong in the second last line of the second last stanza. This poem is so simple yet it holds so much meaning that I can ponder over it one whole day. Really well written. Good work.