Hey there! Writing a review!
I loved your poem. It has a lot of emotions and desire. I liked the way you wrote the feelings of the servant. She loved the prince though she knew she wasn't getting anything.
She was also jealous of the princess but her devotion was never less.
Excellent writing. You can turn it into a story! I would love to read that.
Don't mind but I didn't like the title. It doesn't match with the poem.
Hoping to hear more from you. Keep it up!
~Maisha
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