Hello, Its me
What i liked about this poem is the consistent rhyme scheme. I know it's childish but i love poems that rhyme. The words were well chosen. It also flowed very well.
In my opinion this doesn't make any sense I think that if you even have a theme that it should be more clear. But even so I still enjoyed reading and it was time well spent
Overall this was an okay poem. I can't wait to see more of your work in the near future.
goodbye, Have a nice day!
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