Normal: LordTachanka
Italicized: Flumadiddle.
A long wondered question is what the funniest humor may be.
Some say to ask and then you'll see.
But is this true?
I don't know, why are you asking me?
For this I do not know, but if there's one thing I do it's that I took an arrow to the knee.
But, what if you can't humor?
I know I can't humor.
BUT!
What I do know is that
Adopting a bunch of middle schoolers in the middle of a demogoron crisis,
That seems right.
If you want to find the perfect humor,
you must have the right Determination.
For those of you that don't,
I morn your loss, so heres a carnation.
But those that have the right stuff,
You have my sincerest of playcation.
For when you find this desired humor,
You'll be sayin what in tarnation.
Another great thing is ducks.
Ducks, tis of thee.
Ducks, animal of liberty.
Ducks, animal of the brave.
Ducks.
For you see, there are many types of humor.
Shared by you and me.
But what comes to find is that the most powerful of all humor is found inside.
This humor is known as the meme.
This is the most pure of all.
Except the dab.........we don't talk about that.
This was hilarious! I loved it! I especially loved how in the last line, you said, "Except the dab.........we don't talk about that." That was the part where I died laughing. E.E., this was amazing, I loved how you mentioned your other poem called Ducks, it was awesome! Thank goodness there are writers who will be funny and serious at the same time, cause I needed this today!:)
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Hi E.E! Saru here for a hopefully helpful review!
I'm going to get constructive criticism out of the way first so we can get on with what was great about this.
@LordTachanka, your first section needs a little work, the sentences were worded a little oddly and the flow was slightly off. Try re-reading it and making sure it makes sense, I don't want to be too nitpicky, just do what you think makes the most sense.
Adopting a bunch of middle schoolers in the middle of a demogoron crisis,
I morn your loss, so heres a carnation.
You have my sincerest of playcation.
You'll be sayin what in tarnation.
Ducks, tis of thee.
Ducks, animal of liberty.
Ducks, animal of the brave.
Hello LordTachanka and @Flumadiddle! Kara here for a (hopefully) quick review!Give me your soul.
With that aside, I'm not the best at poetry but here we go!
Bold = grammar and flow issues.
Italics = suggestions and overallStrikethrough = remove
Underline = krazy Kara komments.
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