I love how simple and to the point this poem is. This reminds of this quote:
'What if I fall?
Oh, but my darling,
What if you fly?'
-e.h.
It's the complete opposite of you poem yet I love both so much. One reminds me to try hard to achieve my goals. The other reminds me that I need to keep my feet on the ground and not soar too high off.
I love how the mood of the poem shifts from bright to dark. Also the abrupt end is absolutely perfect for the poem.
All of us fall at one point in our life and it's perfectly okay to fall. it's human ,we can't really get everything we want.
Points: 190
Reviews: 10
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