I'm not too into poetry so i cannot really say much about this. it does have a very Japanese feel to it, maybe it's because i watch too much anime. your style is also quite interesting and i don't really think this goes much as fantasy. personal opinion shouldn't count too much so do try get an opinion for other people 'cause like i said, I'm not good at poetry. keep writing!
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