My name is Kismet.
Life on autopilot,
Predetermined choices,
And fictional freedom.
With a voice that bears no gravity,
And a body that bears no weight.
The sky is out of reach,
And the Earth?
No, I am not grounded.
I dwell in a subconscious limbo.
Constantly arriving,
At points of diversion.
On a bifurcated trail,
I turned left.
For a left is a left,
And a right is a left.
Beyond the split,
I depart,
Yet again, only to arrive.
At another divide,
I turned right.
For a right is a right,
And a left is a right.
My name is Kismet,
And my life is on autopilot.
Morals and ethics,
Doctrines of religion,
Schools of philosophy,
Abandoning one,
And adopting another.
A conviction of free will.
Free will? Free will?
Free will you say?
What a fool.
My name is Kismet,
Takdir.
Fate.
My life is on autopilot.
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i love this. my life is on auto pilot, that's very top notch. you're professional right? Lol, don't mind me, i just really loved that you were able to express so much emotion in very few words. the sentences are short and precise. do watch your punctuation any ways, it makes for an interesting read so keep it up.
hey,rikki here for a review
The poetic piece looks like a nice composition though.
It is about a fictitious character called 'KISSmet'
Almost entire piece is good.
Kismet is not a aeroplane but is till on autopilot.
Bravo, young poet.
All the very best, Keep writing.