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This is eally good, but only as a prolouge. It's very speeck-like, but I'm sure that's intentional. My only real critique is that you say "The older of the two" and then "the younger of the tow" in the description. You could just say "The younger" because we already know who your comparing.
Wow!!! This is awesome, Dynamo!!!! I would certainly buy it if you had it published!!!!!
This reminds me a lot of the 3rd Inuyasha movie. You remember how it starts? With Sesshomaru questioning Inutaisho's actions and dedication to Inuyasha's mother? It's awesome!
I love it. It is a well thought out story, as far as I can tell. If it does get published, which i sure it will, I will buy it. If you look at my post, you can esilly tell i am not the one to ask for comments about spelling. However, I beleive this Idea is good. Pm me if i does get published!