Wow. That was very romantic...that was the kind of poem that makes everything I write look like crap.
I liked how you managed the long lines without over doing it and breaking the flow. The last stanza was the most beautiful--totally appropiate for ending a poem. Great work.
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You say the word "yeah" alot, and I almost felt like this was a song. Last stanza was amazing