The title was rather appropiate...thanks for not naming it "I know what it tastes like". I liked "Nostalgia" a lot. I love how the first and second stanza blended together but yet they changed...that was probably one of the best metaphors I've ever seen from you. The ending was sad, but it seemed like you could've saif a little more I didn't really like it as much as the first two stanzas. Those were cool.
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